What a beautiful piece you have written here. It is as though walking through a fairyland with the descriptions. Thoroughly enjoyed and your poetry always holds so much magic and beautiful descriptions. Great Job
Wow this was absolutely impressive.. such clear descriptions give us beautiful imagery to look at as we read. Awesome work, flow was spot on. Such a joy to read such a beautiful nature poem.. it made me smile.
"Beneath the midnight sky of June
cuddled in silky strands of moon,
violet blends reflected by
shimmering glow of firefly."
I really like how you describe what month it is and where this poem is taking place. Also, in the second line "cuddled" adds so much imagery. I like the way you worded everything in the second line, its just so unique and not cliche at all. In the third line your words kept my attention and had me visualizing every word. The fourth line was one of the best in this stanza. I love the word "shimmering" first of all, its out there you know? Its not a plain kind of word. The rest of the line was written so beautifully I just had to read on.
"Daffodils in pinkish gown
crickets jumping all around,
pearls of dew rest on a bloom
near the tawny plump mushroom."
Wow, you know I sometimes find it harder to rhyme without it being forced, but here its just wonderful. The first line was the best in my opinion. I would have just written probably "Pink daffodils", but you have gone beyond that and this just painted such purity and beauty in my mind! The second line was okay, I felt it to be the only line that wasn't as unique as others, but it was still good. In the third line, more creativity! Instead of just saying "sparkling dew", you say "pearls of dew", nicely worded, that just blew me away! The fourth line was cute, it made me smile that you put mushrooms in your poem, nice job!
"Slowly skyline stirs the hue
Orange mixed with tinge of blue,
grey silhouettes fade away
sunbeams spread its magic spray."
A stunning ending, truly this just left me speechless. The first line was so deep and entrancing and the second line gave the reader even more colors to imagine. The third and fourth line had me wanting more, they were just so flawless. 5/5 from me, you are one terrific poetess. There was so much creativity and originality oozing out of every line. High five for that! I am going to nominate this for the weekly contest, good luck.