World on Fire

by Leah20   Aug 7, 2009


A World on Fire
Full of life
Brimming
Overflowing
Crashing
Currents sweep me
Along
To sea and back
We're here only for
So long
Reach for the currents
Touch the life
You
To this point
Had only dreamed
(Im)possible
Possibilities
Float within me
Hunting searching seeking
Embrace the thrill
The electricity
Of the night
Of a life
You learn to l()ve

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Single word impact poetry if written well thuds out its message, this is the closest I have read to this type of poetry since I joined the site and I enjoyed its flow and uniqueness very much excellent Ray S 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Had only dreamed
    (Im)possible
    Possibilities

    ^^ love how you have written impossible .. could be interpreted in many ways

    Embrace the thrill
    The electricity
    Of the night
    Of a life
    You learn to l()ve

    ^^ a beautiful thought... thats the way to live life... well penned :)

    keep writing

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem was written wiith a delightful style
    I sense a passinate depth