I like your style and this is the most imaginative astronomical metaphor that I have ever read in relation to a personal romance and that makes this one really stand out like your one in a million

This is really heart renching. Filled with emotions that touches deep within one soul.

"I stare at the sky trying to count the stars,
Started over a hundred times by now.
I look to my heart trying to count the scars,
Wondering is it even possible, and how?

I know I've hurt you made you cry,
Like fading stars at dawn lost your trust.
My love for you endless like the sky,
Even with my mistakes incredibly unjust".

I enjoy the first stanza, then as i reach the second, it made me think, waw, that is really love because you puts yourself at your lover's place. This is really well done and merit a nomination. I like your writing styles. Very well done 5/5, kel.

What a wonderful opening! A bode to "Let me count the ways." What a way to say your love is endless, and to praise your love and friendship. You write so well Karl.

Very profound poem my friend :) What a beautiful love you share with your girl. You write it out beautifully! Im loving your work :)

Wow, Karl... This one is really well worded... I can relate to the story...

The last stanza is my favorite:

So I'll forever keep my promise to you,
In my heart I know you'll never be far.
The first time I saw you my soul knew,
You'd always be my beautiful north star.

Nice work, dude!!! It's an inspiration... 5/5 for this one!!!

Wow yet again you have wrote an amazing piece i love it am expression of that kind of love and in such an amazing way you really are a magnificent writer im addin this to my favorites it was really deep and so pure like truely from the heart great job 5/5

Interesting. I enjoyed the opening metaphor, and you seemed to defiantly be leading somewhere...but then you really didn't. Yes, you moved onto love from the stars, but from there, you just seemed to be saying the same thing again and again, without any real progression in the story. Also, your flow seems a little off in places.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

I liked this hun :) you are so goog with love poems. But I want to see something different from you. Dazzle me with some dark poetry. I know you can do it because you are so talented and all of your poems have a nice touch to them. Lovely diction as always. Very clear message and easy to relate to. Come on surprise me with something new. Great as always dear :) Nik

Your an amazing poet let me just say that.

This was my favorite stanza:

So I'll forever keep my promise to you,
In my heart I know you'll never be far.
The first time I saw you my soul knew,
You'd always be my beautiful north star.

Keep em coming, i enjoy reading your poems