Comments : The Hardest Lesson? With or Without You The Earth Still Turns

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This thought provoking piece made me think of zen meditation briefly. This demonstrated to me how blissfull it is to lose ones self

  • 8 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Wow I totally agree with the first comment, this poem actually made me question myself, brilliant job! Its quite difficult to make a reader engange themselves in your poetry =]
    Brilliant job, Im extremly impressed!

  • 8 years ago

    by H E Losey

    REally enjoyed the write and the meaning here impacted.
    I wish you had continued to used the "bullet" type statements throughout as they add emphasis and could get longer as they built to the conclusion.

  • 8 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Still making great poetry I see, 5/5.

    Greetings from fellow site veteran, peace.

  • 6 years ago

    by cierra

    Love it. kind of sad, but a deep lesson.

  • 6 years ago

    by Khalid

    Close your eyes.

    Don't move.

    Don't breathe.

    A deep concentration is required upon doing these steps to cease to exist for a moment.

    Great job. Keep up

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    Another great write... This poem too induces the reader to flow with the piece and realise the message u gave...

    Good work:)
    5/5 from me