Ok...this was beautifully written but so incredibly sad, it made me cry seeing it play out. You do a wonderful job at putting emotions into words and drawing the reader into the world of the poem. This is amazing like the others I've read, wonderful job. You might want to change the word "feels" to "fills" on the 26th line though. Wonderful job though
Aww! This poem is sooo beautiful! I loved it to be honest but was so shocked at the ending, I was expecting a happy ending. I love how you wrote about your love throughout all the seasons and holidays.. That was very sweet and romantic. Great job with this poem!