Another Christmas

by Cale   Dec 22, 2009


Its just another Christmas season.
Malls are packed with people looking for perfect gifts.
Couples walk holding hands with great happiness.
But I'm left again with no one to give me a lift.

Then something about you catches my eye.
The way your face is one of a kind.
I know that I have got to meet you.
Your the girl I have wanted but couldn't find.

Its Christmas day and i got what i wanted.
The most amazing girl in the world to give my heart.
I never knew that Christmas could go so great.
Its only been a few weeks and i hate being apart.

Valentines use to be just a stupid holiday,
But it means so much more since i met you.
Not only does love fill the hearts of many.
It also fills ours and our love is so true.

Its just another great summer night.
I lay with you as fireworks fill the air.
The fireworks that also fill my heart overwhelms me.
I'm still blown away as i watch your sweet blond hair.

Halloween was made to help you be someone new.
But when your the luckiest guy ever
You don't want to be anyone else.
You just want to be in love forever.

I'm reminded again of when we met.
Snow feels the air and music in our ears.
Now we are the one holding hands.
Things have changed so much in a year!

I'm getting your gift as i get the call.
I'm so shocked that i drop the phone.
You didn't see the ice and you died on impact.
Now I'm left again to celebrate Christmas alone.

My tears as they leave my face.
I watch as they lower you into the dirt.
When you left me you took my heart.
And I'm left with nothing but this terrible hurt....

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  • 7 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Ok...this was beautifully written but so incredibly sad, it made me cry seeing it play out. You do a wonderful job at putting emotions into words and drawing the reader into the world of the poem. This is amazing like the others I've read, wonderful job. You might want to change the word "feels" to "fills" on the 26th line though. Wonderful job though

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww! This poem is sooo beautiful! I loved it to be honest but was so shocked at the ending, I was expecting a happy ending. I love how you wrote about your love throughout all the seasons and holidays.. That was very sweet and romantic. Great job with this poem!

  • 7 years ago

    by Kuro

    Well, this was a good poem in the sense that it had nice rhyming and told a nice love story.

    BUT THE END WAS SOO VERY SAD!
    ;_;

  • 7 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Oh my goodness, this poem stunned me. The ending was unexpected lol. Its a beautiful poem , so full of love. Very well written.

    All the best,
    Olwin.

  • 7 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow cale, do you know how much your writing has changed from your first poem to now??? this is an amazing write and i am so proud of you!!!! 5/5

    -laura