I think its definately relatable to everyone who has ever been in love or had a broken heart, and if they haven't had their heart broken yet they soon will. I gave this a 5/5 on pure emotion and truth alone nicely done.
Some thing to watch for: Sometimes taking out or adding a word will help your flow greatly. Always capitalize the letter "I" because its you. Words like would and not when used together should be "wouldn't" it just sounds much better and is proper. These are all little things that you'll figure out and learn as you progress and continue writing, they'll soon become second nature. Best of luck.
This is really sad.but i know how you feel 100%.. i hope that everything gets better for you.. and that you find a girl one day that wont hurt you.. and that you guys will fall in love and stay together forever
It seems odd to call this a beautiful poem but it is. The emotions flowing through it are strong and sadly something a lot of people can relate to all to well. You did a wonderful job at writing this, the wording is perfect, the flow is good and the expression of the emotions is perfect. Hang in there, the pain does fade some after a while :P 5/5
I also feel like this poem is very relatable to people. having your heart broken is a horrible and awful feeling that people tend to experience. but we all go through it. and we're all here to help heal that pain. :) great job!
Its a poem I hope, as I have been there and I have known the pain and the feeling of wrong when the one you love pulls the plug,
A well worded and different than the usual dear John poems. It's hard to put on paper those feelings of despair but one must remember life has its ups and downs and we must get on with it as life is to short and at my age I know it is. Excellent read 5/5 Ray S