Comments : Healing A Broken Heart

  • 7 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think its definately relatable to everyone who has ever been in love or had a broken heart, and if they haven't had their heart broken yet they soon will. I gave this a 5/5 on pure emotion and truth alone nicely done.

    Some thing to watch for: Sometimes taking out or adding a word will help your flow greatly. Always capitalize the letter "I" because its you. Words like would and not when used together should be "wouldn't" it just sounds much better and is proper. These are all little things that you'll figure out and learn as you progress and continue writing, they'll soon become second nature. Best of luck.

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. this is soo sad... I'm really affected by this poem because I'm going through something similar.. how ironic that I just got my heart broken today.. =( the poem was very real.. good job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Lauran

    Cale,

    This poem is AMAZING!

    :)

  • 7 years ago

    by sasha Rashell hall

    This is really sad.but i know how you feel 100%.. i hope that everything gets better for you.. and that you find a girl one day that wont hurt you.. and that you guys will fall in love and stay together forever

  • 7 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    It seems odd to call this a beautiful poem but it is. The emotions flowing through it are strong and sadly something a lot of people can relate to all to well. You did a wonderful job at writing this, the wording is perfect, the flow is good and the expression of the emotions is perfect. Hang in there, the pain does fade some after a while :P 5/5
    ~Angel~

  • 7 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Woah this was amazing, great job

  • 7 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I also feel like this poem is very relatable to people. having your heart broken is a horrible and awful feeling that people tend to experience. but we all go through it. and we're all here to help heal that pain. :) great job!

  • 7 years ago

    by KJ

    Amazing write. You did a wonderful job with your voice in this poem. Nice flow as well.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Its a poem I hope, as I have been there and I have known the pain and the feeling of wrong when the one you love pulls the plug,
    A well worded and different than the usual dear John poems. It's hard to put on paper those feelings of despair but one must remember life has its ups and downs and we must get on with it as life is to short and at my age I know it is. Excellent read 5/5 Ray S

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I can really relate