This piece is amazing!!! You've said everything really really well. You deserve the victory! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

:O I love this. I mean it goes without saying that what you're writing about is an inspiring topic but the way you put it was extraordinary. You interpreted that assignment wonderfully and I absolutely adore how you wrote this. The last line being the same until the end was a very nice touch. 5/5. Great job.

I love the heart and soal that you put in this poem. It really makes the reader think. Only good poets can do that, and trust me you're a good poet. Be proud of that fact.
Thank you for joining my contest, and I'm sorry I took so long to get back.
>~Spirit~>
P.S. Thanks for the read.

I love the heart and soal that you put in this poem. It really makes the reader think. Only good poets can do that, and trust me you're a good poet. Be proud of that fact.
Thank you for joining my contest, and I'm sorry I took so long to get back.
>~Spirit~>
P.S. Thanks for the read.

I gave you 5 stars, while reading the beginning!
I wish there was 100 to Vote this poetry! :)
Well don!

Very strong and powerful
i love its it'sso true and you know how to describe your thoughts you pic the right words in the right place w
wooow
wel done

I won't attempt to elaborate on all the previous comments relating to this creation. Why? Because its depth of heart is pretty much beyond words.
I realise you did this one ages ago, but don't ever lose whatever was in you at this time!

Liked it, we all have souls and spirits with no color! I remember growing up as a young boy, being troubled when I heard derogatory remarks from a parent regarding someone's race or religious beliefs. Thank God that they never stuck, I believe that there is good, and, bad in all races. We never taught our kids to hate or discriminate, never regretted that. Love your determination for what is right!