This poem means absolutely nothing to me and it is way too short and indescriptive. it is definitely to short to mean any sense. unconditional means nothing in return where is the imagery of that strong feeling in this shallow poem i'm not sorry but the truth is that this is definitely a poor poem
Sweet and simple. usually in my eyes, these have the most feeling :) i like this alot
6 years ago
A wonderful haiku, short and to the point. i was always terrible at haiku. It definitely portrays a lot more meaning than one would normally associate with a 5/7/5 syllable structure, well done, i think you embodied the intentions of a Haiku perfectly.