Comments : Time, Immortal (Shape Poetry)

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    WOW!! I really admire the fact that you do these shape poetry sooooo very very well!
    I've tried it many times & can never get it
    right! Excellent work!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Meena is right, shape poetry seems to come easy for you. I can never get them right. The message is enhanced by the shape and gives the reader a sense of that pendulum actually swinging back and forth. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I dont know how you do this so beautifully everytime. What a great message with a wonderful image.

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Thisis an interestinglooking form. Good imagery and word choice!

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    A very smart write from you. Loved the depth descfiption of yesterdays, it triggered some things that were left behind. EXCELLENT PIECE from you..:-)

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    Congrats on your win..:-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Congrats deary :) this was a wonderful poem and I'm so glad it won. Job well done :) Nik

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    you did a awesome job on the form. But it is your words that touch the reader the most.
    Excellent!
    Congrats on your win!
    Love Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    OUTSTANDING Raj!.... lLol. And a very well deserved win :)