Comments : Remember Me

  • 8 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I will remember you because you're awesome :] I can really relate to this piece as well as what you said at the end. People can be so pretty when they have on a mask. I really enjoyed this piece dear. Keep it up :] Nik

  • 8 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Dearest Countess,

    Hold your head up and walk away in grace. What goes around comes around is sooooooooo true. I enjoyed the repetition of the first line in each stanza. It drives home the point your making. I hope your heart is not shut due to this thief of love stealing away your happiness, such a scoundrel.

  • 8 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Walah..amazing amazing ra2e3a

    i love it
    much ..with its sadness..sweetens..blaming..disappointment..i love it all..with the expressions and concepts

    and no be u gna find bunch of ppl who relate to it
    not me but..many will

    gr8 job expressing ur disappointment and yeanings
    gd title !

  • 7 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    AWWWWWW this poem made me cry. Nice work!

  • 7 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Love it, this poem fits so well with a past relationship of mine, every word. "i don't miss him, i miss who i thought he was" my favourite line, so short but so powerful. after the torture of your heart be betrayed to say, your loss, i'm over you, i just feel sorry for your next victim, remeber me, because one day you'll realise what you lost.
    great poem 5/5

    take care