I will remember you because you're awesome :] I can really relate to this piece as well as what you said at the end. People can be so pretty when they have on a mask. I really enjoyed this piece dear. Keep it up :] Nik
Hold your head up and walk away in grace. What goes around comes around is sooooooooo true. I enjoyed the repetition of the first line in each stanza. It drives home the point your making. I hope your heart is not shut due to this thief of love stealing away your happiness, such a scoundrel.
Love it, this poem fits so well with a past relationship of mine, every word. "i don't miss him, i miss who i thought he was" my favourite line, so short but so powerful. after the torture of your heart be betrayed to say, your loss, i'm over you, i just feel sorry for your next victim, remeber me, because one day you'll realise what you lost.
great poem 5/5