And Now I'm Alone

Wow, I feel at loss for words. This was very emotional and everything you have expressed in this poem, the bitter pain, practically dripped off the lines, but it wasn't over-done by any means. The word choice warmed my heart and also instilled in me that feeling of brokenness and hurt that results in these lies. But we must get back up again. I really felt a connection when reading this and you weren't just writing, you were living and giving all of your soul. Really well done, I have to look at more of your work. Please keep it up :)

MaryAnne

Wow... Amazing poem! So heartbreaking and sad... it really touched me.. I can relate to the feelings you've expressed in this poem. It's really hard to go through such feelings.. and you've expressed them so perfectly. Very well-wrtten! Great job!

A very sad poem, I can feel your pain, it just oozes from the screen..

In spite of what people say, you never get used to this, the breaking up.

I am sorry for you, hope things will get better.

5/5 Ingrid

Abosolutey lovely! really liked it.. will read it again lol keep it up :D

A heartfelt piece, Lol. So well written and expressed. Love your writing and how you can so draw the reader into your thoughts and feelings with your words...
Very Well Done :)