And Now I'm Alone

by Jad   Oct 27, 2010


You said you'd be there,
painting a secure dream
promising me the sky;
yet what do I have now?
Nothing but a steady downpour,
destroying my broken heart.

My hopes and promises
turned to vapor
blown away with time
as you disappeared,
taking away my peace
denying me my future.

All things turn out for good,
but every thing's torn
As I stand here by myself
Though all along I have,
but I believed your lies
and now I'm alone.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, I feel at loss for words. This was very emotional and everything you have expressed in this poem, the bitter pain, practically dripped off the lines, but it wasn't over-done by any means. The word choice warmed my heart and also instilled in me that feeling of brokenness and hurt that results in these lies. But we must get back up again. I really felt a connection when reading this and you weren't just writing, you were living and giving all of your soul. Really well done, I have to look at more of your work. Please keep it up :)

    MaryAnne

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... Amazing poem! So heartbreaking and sad... it really touched me.. I can relate to the feelings you've expressed in this poem. It's really hard to go through such feelings.. and you've expressed them so perfectly. Very well-wrtten! Great job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A very sad poem, I can feel your pain, it just oozes from the screen..

    In spite of what people say, you never get used to this, the breaking up.

    I am sorry for you, hope things will get better.

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Anisa

    Abosolutey lovely! really liked it.. will read it again lol keep it up :D

  • 7 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A heartfelt piece, Lol. So well written and expressed. Love your writing and how you can so draw the reader into your thoughts and feelings with your words...
    Very Well Done :)