Comments : And Now I'm Alone

  • 6 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Jad, overall a sad piece but heard more often than not. Second to last line might flow a bit better as
    "believed in your lies". Good job, thanks for sharing

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Austin looks like the writers block has lifted. This is wonderful and the message is sad. One I understand all to well.

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Jad this is expressed very well.
    I love the word choice, the flow is not bad at all. You had this poetic temperature which i loved and was able to relate to ur feelings due to the smart word choice .

    for the concept of the poem, I really felt the sadness ! The lonesome..the disappointment..how much do we get promises ..how often..and much do we get disappointed , when these promises are broken.

    Trust me, you are not alone, and the only time you would be alone, is when you choose to be. Those who give promises, never mean them, look for those who mean IT, without promising u -_-

  • 6 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    It's hard to accept the fact that someone lies when you never thought they ever would, it hurts but you learn to move on and realize you are better off without them. An emotional, well done piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Touching write... the feeling of lonleiness and betrayal is well expressed.
    //painting a secure dream
    promising me the sky;
    // loved these lines
    well written.

  • 6 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A heartfelt piece, Lol. So well written and expressed. Love your writing and how you can so draw the reader into your thoughts and feelings with your words...
    Very Well Done :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Anisa

    Abosolutey lovely! really liked it.. will read it again lol keep it up :D

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A very sad poem, I can feel your pain, it just oozes from the screen..

    In spite of what people say, you never get used to this, the breaking up.

    I am sorry for you, hope things will get better.

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 6 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... Amazing poem! So heartbreaking and sad... it really touched me.. I can relate to the feelings you've expressed in this poem. It's really hard to go through such feelings.. and you've expressed them so perfectly. Very well-wrtten! Great job!

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, I feel at loss for words. This was very emotional and everything you have expressed in this poem, the bitter pain, practically dripped off the lines, but it wasn't over-done by any means. The word choice warmed my heart and also instilled in me that feeling of brokenness and hurt that results in these lies. But we must get back up again. I really felt a connection when reading this and you weren't just writing, you were living and giving all of your soul. Really well done, I have to look at more of your work. Please keep it up :)

    MaryAnne