Wow... Amazing poem! So heartbreaking and sad... it really touched me.. I can relate to the feelings you've expressed in this poem. It's really hard to go through such feelings.. and you've expressed them so perfectly. Very well-wrtten! Great job!
Wow, I feel at loss for words. This was very emotional and everything you have expressed in this poem, the bitter pain, practically dripped off the lines, but it wasn't over-done by any means. The word choice warmed my heart and also instilled in me that feeling of brokenness and hurt that results in these lies. But we must get back up again. I really felt a connection when reading this and you weren't just writing, you were living and giving all of your soul. Really well done, I have to look at more of your work. Please keep it up :)