I wish I was able to give you more then a 5. I got chills reading each word at first I was a little confused but soon realized what you were speaking of.
I am so impressed with this poem, I hope everyone here reads this and absorbs exactly what you were trying to say.
awesome, no brilliant.
I really liked this poem as it gave a good description of what Christmas came around for. There were some parts that had some imagery and it made it very nice to see what was happening as we read the poem. Also the flow was descent as it only got a little distant a few times. All in all, a great read and story. Great job and keep writing.