Comments : Soft Snowflakes... ( A Quatern Sonnet)

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    How appropriate for most of the club members, snowflakes and I am sure that most of them would agree with your words, I do. I just don't miss them (smiles).

  • 6 years ago

    by Jad

    I really like this form and you seem to have done a descent job with it. I haven't checked to see if you did it right but it looked right from what I could see off the top of my head. Anyway the rhyming was actually somewhat descent and wasn't forced or anything which really helped the flow of your poem, which I thought was really good. The description of the snow is wonderful and it instills the image of snow falling and a changing of all the terrain.

    All in all, I found this to be a very appropriate piece for the season and also I found it to be a wonderful nature poem with nice descriptions. Beautiful word choice as well. Great job and keep writing.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    I love the snow and I love your poem :)
    What a beauty you have penned.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 6 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is so pretty, very nicely penned. I love snow and i love everything abt & your choice of words has just created a beautiful image in my mind, thanks for posting this poem.

    Great write as always :)

    all the best and take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    My, my..I like this form and more so what you have done with it! It unfolds so smoothly with soft images for the mind..excellent write!

  • 6 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Well done nice flow and image.