I feel like the poem left me speechless that I am at loss, I don't know what to say!
I love it..the structure was strong and the expressions..very original

I love this poem with it's great potential!
5/5keep writing

Kay
what a beauty :) You always leave the reader wanting more. You pulled me right into the vision you were seeing with every word.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Very nice work Kay, I like the shortness of the lines and your use of description, it really spoke to me and it was a pleasure to read, great work.

'Mindblowing'..thats all i would say..don't want to ruin the taste this poem has left in me.. :)

Paint euphoria
in my veins
with palette in
your own hand

One of the best stanza i have come across lately.

all the best and take care

The only praise worthy of this poem must be given by borriwing from the Creator you have Painted euphoria
in my veins

I really liked the short lines here because it set up a nice pace when reading. Your choice of vocabulary was exquisite and refreshing to read. It didn't overpower the poem at all and added a nice touch to the overall piece.

"Paint euphoria
in my veins
with palette in
your own hand"
^I LOVE the image this stanza created in my mind! I could feel the euphoria you hope was to be painted. Very nice use of imagery here. Flawless!

I like the timeless essence in your writing. It has a unique style which makes it that much more fun to read. I really enjoyed it :)