Comments : Someone special.....missed on this special day (Loop poem)

  • 7 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is great! I liked the repetition you used, made it flow perfectly. The imagery you've set couldn't be better. This poem is full of emotions, i loved reading every bit of it. Keep up the good work! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully Penned!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This someone special truly sounds like an angel. The flow is smooth and behind each line there are deep sentiments too..nicely done! It also looks like you have done a loop poem..liked the read :)

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    I loved the structure. . . A loop poem.
    Its the first time I see one. Its interesting and also I liked the emotion.

    my favorite lines:

    "Someone who knows how to read
    Read the writings of an inner soul"

    "A heart that is full of love, soft and gentle
    Gentle but pretends to be rock hard"

  • 6 years ago

    by Ebony Hope

    Oh my, the emotion in this piece is wow. Amazing. I am absolutely speechless thanks to this piece.