Only thing I didn't like was the usage of 'thy', you didn't use this language anywhere else in the poem so I don't see it really fitting. Other than that, this was really well written, not a whole lot to say.
There were so many deeply intense imagery that came alive in this piece for me, the meaning of loving boldly to reach out and give miracles...everything was just expressed perfectly and the structure is unbreaking, it flows with purpose and a huge sense of impact. "wage peace" was soft yet a desire this world holds inside, you really connect with the reader here...
I've read this a number of times now, and I have to admit that I don't like it as much as the other winning poems this week. The reason is that some of the imagery is very confusing, which causes the overall message to be confusing.
Poetic devices, like metaphors and similes, should help to illuminate the message, but some of these are so mysterious and cryptic, I'm not really sure what you are trying to say.
I enjoy poetry that has a little mystery, but not so much that it leaves me confused and scratching my head.