I absolutely love your opening stanza!! That really drew me in, props to you on your creativity with that.
The middle kept me so interested and then I reached the end...WOW!! That was so deep, almost scary in a way reading a person talk about they are ok with going to hell. BUT! I love how it really changed the tone of the poem. Personally, I love poems that do that!
I loved this over all I wouldnt rate it anything less that a 5!