by Ndanileka          Jun 20, 2011
    
        category :
            Life, society /
            other
            
    
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            I could calm down a hostile crowd  | 
 
    by Silent Girl
| Smooth flow :) 5/5 | 
 
    by ronel mccarthy
| Lovely write .........cool to find a fellow South African on the site ! | 
 
    by Ste
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            I like this. The potential and the accomplishment already are evident. It could do with a polish i feel to settle the rhythm a little. There are some truly excellent allusions in here which i had thought of (despite having many years head start on you). |