A lonely Soul...I read this...and Ya...its interesting...the way you wrote it as a love poem is truly appreciable.....
'Yes they are
inseparable like Ying and Yang'....nice innovation..well done to keep this piece intact with the intelligent use of these words...and thank you for the motivation stuff...
I like the depth this poem reached and each verse underlined the message really well. The rhetorical question reminds the reader that the answer is quite obvious already. I do not think that the examples and comparisons were overused or cliche. I think you chose a structure that fit to the content. Overall this is a powerful poem with a strong meaning.
How true each word is. We can't have one
without the other..all are connected and in a way related so that we learn through each experience. Well Penned!
7 years ago
This piece is amazing. I really don't know what to say about it, though. I mean I love this piece, but I... I guess I am speechless. I guess you are just that good.
6 years ago
Can one exist without the other?
Rhetorical question as Jenni mentioned. well written poem.
it shows how we are nothing if we are alone. We will always need the support of others.
And I really liked how you use winners without losers. I think that some people really need to take this into account. 5/5