OMG I absolutely love this poem, and its going for my favorites, great job as usual 5/5 x

The title draw me in the second I read it but I never imagined to find this. I rarely see this much feeling in a poem. Your word choice and the way you played with the language underline your emotion really well. The flow and rhyme were quite good too. Overall this is a really heartfelt poem that captivated me.

I agree whole heartedly with Lili and Jenni.
The title while simple makes you want to read,
and the poem itself was lovely, a great job.
Only think I would say is don't forget punctuation, that will help the flow and make it a little easier to read.

Overall,
a fantastic job

love Tara-Kay
xx

A romantic love poem?
They all seem the same, anyways. Lol. I'm kidding, this made me smile! :)
But I think there is a typo in the last line:

"Find away" = "Find a way"

When I first read the title, I thought that this was meant to be a poem about a wedding or something where people vow and I don't know, lol, I wasn't that much impressed and caught by the title, so, I suggest to change it.

But there was a soft flow, some words felt promising and smooth. Good work.

Very beautiful, but I do think, Also, that I thought the poem would be about a wedding, you might want to look into another interesting title.

But the flow, it was very smooth.
I love the rhyme, and the whole story behind the poem.

Another great write :D

Great Write, Kudos!!!

I love this who ever inspired u 4 this poem is very lucky to have that love :) 5/5 I loved everything :)