Forever a Scar

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Aug 19, 2011


A smile on your face
Across my heart is the place
It enters my body taking over my skin
I can feel the love as it stains deep with in

Now your there for the world to see
Your forever apart of what I will be
No matter where you go, no matter how far
You're always there with me, forever a scar

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  • 13 years ago

    by Vanesa

    Short and lovely.
    Minor spelling details but over all a great write.

  • 13 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Very powerful, but the grammatical errors messes with the flow a bit. Other than that, it creates a lot of thoughts and images that make you want to read the poem all over again.
    5/5
    -Heather

  • 14 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Short but very heartfelt i loved it

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueJay

    They have said everything that could possibly be said. Fantastic job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Simple and deep at the same time as a love poem should be. I liked the "forever scar" it fit perfect with what you were saying
    Connie

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