Comments : Driving To Your House

  • 6 years ago

    by Britt

    Beautiful poetry, Abby. Your love stuff is some of my favorite, it doesn't get into the ooey gooey details of passion, but it absorbs the fun parts of love, the new things you witness and the different outlook you have on situations. That's an important part of love to me, the small things. Awesome imagery, by the way. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kiko

    I like the way you use the exuberance you have for spring as a metaphor for how you feel about visiting your lover, and the neat way you project your own feelings onto the stranger you nearly ran over.

    It's also nice to see good, concrete imagery, without having it fluffed up with a bunch of cryptic and vacuous metaphors.

    Very skillfully crafted. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Did you almost do a hit and run on my boyfriend?

    But really. It feels like you are closer than a hemisphere and a few continents away. It's more like you live in a tree house in my backyard, spying and devising ways to write poems that make my heart twist.

    (This is a weird and convoluted way of saying that I like this poem, [of course I do].)

  • 6 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    YES!

    and.....
    masses of magnolia also charm me..
    anytimeI have the great good fortune
    to encounter them..

    As we here gently enter Autumn, I say:
    big beauteous blessings on you
    and your impending Spring...;-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like this, it's dreamy and hazy and reading it feels like sitting in a park on a windy day. You've worded it nicely and it has great flow... well written!

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    At least like the flowing river was a good luck hahahah CONGRATS :)

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    <3