Comments : Sweet Adoration

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Magnolias are one of my favor flowers. The scent of them is something unlike any other, their shape as well. Nice job with the forms challenge.

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was so natural, so like reserved, the wording was really pleasant, and worked well, I loved the flow and rhyme scheme, just so different to other stuff I've read and a lovely surprise

    love always,
    Tara
    xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh.. Im in love with your writing already! A beautiful nature poem, with a wonderful flow to it. And also a great job on the forms challenge!

    Well done Connie :D

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A very good piece. You made this a wonderful nature poem, I could smell the magnolias

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    This was short and heavy. It is funny how a stanza short, can unveil majestic beauty. Each word but, constructs the vividity of magnolias blooming and caressing over a meadow.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like nature poems and this was simply a lovely write to read :) Good job with the form challenge!!

  • 6 years ago

    by yogi73

    This is a wonderful poem. You put the right amount of detail into this poem. very good

  • 6 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    I like this nice flowing intense poem about the budding of flowers and their scent. Makes me feel like I'm in a field watching the flowers. The way it flows makes me think it could be the lyrics of a song.

  • 6 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite Write, Enjoyed!!!