Comments : Emotional Dancer

  • 6 years ago

    by Jack Crimson Nightengale

    Entrancing, hypnotic words that seem to pop out and show themselves as a movie preview. Loved it.

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Original thought and idea here Connie. Using dance to present the emotions of love. Nicely done.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    I always wonder, how do you come up with these kinda ideas on your busy schedule? Well, its either youre slacking off at work or somebody is inspiring you, or both, lol, just kidding. Anyhow, you did it again here, a wonderful poem once more, nothing more to add. :D

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You had exceptional rhyme ,the flow was smooth and unbroken, very easy to read. It's creative and very deep as our emotions do dance in the air and become twisted in various situations

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Now, I cannot believe I have only just seen this, I must have had my eyes shut yesterday!!

    I agree with all of the above,
    This was original, and enchanting, and so serene.
    I loved the rhyme which was phenomenally done (Is that even spelt right?) But above that the flow was top quality, and I loved this.

    Just a fantastic piece, that made me feel so calm.

    Love
    Tara
    xxx

  • 6 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! Connie, I love this poem! The title caught my eye, and I loved how you compared types of dances to emotions... it was such a delight to read. I loved your choice of words as well. Well done!

  • 6 years ago

    by Kuro

    Interesting rhymes you used.

    Tightrope of torment
    gentle ballet of despair
    as you dip into romance
    life's emotional snare.

    ^that was my favorite stanza. very creative description and metaphor. "ballet of despair" was brilliantly penned. loved it.

  • 6 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Unique .. beautiful.. warm ... perfect ... connie :D amazing 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Connie!

    That's amazing, I LOVED the originality here, very well-done, God bless you. :)

    Love.

    Noura.

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    CONNIE.

    This is truly an amazing piece.
    I was driven by the title. It seemed eerie, to me. And when you took off, my heart started pounding, literally.
    It's like a medley of emotions which are well portrayed all throughout from the beginning till the very end.
    Original, creative, serene... and most of all: rhythmic.

    Amazing work Connie.
    Keep those comin' my friend ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Now i got it..thanks for explaining..

  • 6 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    "Tightrope of torment
    gentle ballet of despair
    as you dip into romance
    life's emotional snare."

    my fav part ^_^

    loved the whole thing!
    the flow was amazing.. i read the first part and had to keep reading. very orignal and enticing

    keep it up
    5/5 from me

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A very well structured and precisely executed array of thoughts. I would pick a fav stanza but I love the entire piece. The co-relation of words is astounding. Semantics of course is subjective. But in my opinion this piece is graceful yet ravishing. Penned.

  • 6 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well I've never thought that words could dance, but you made it dance with your vocabulary, it did got me hypnotize for a while and drown within your passion of wordplay. A beautiful write with a beautiful flow. Excellent Job Connie:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    /Tightrope of torment
    gentle ballet of despair
    as you dip into romance
    life's emotional snare.
    //
    I really loved this stanza... so cleverly written ... very interesting style of writing you have :)

    /devotion the catalyst
    for the emotional race.
    // it's very true ... beautifully put across.