Wow this poem is so great! it has a lot of emotion i can relate to and i'm sure others can too. my favorite part was I just want this fake reality, to just end, i think this line is something a lot of people feel as well. well done 5/5 ^.^
I have always been through your poems especially the sad ones or about life and not a surprise for me that they say and teach a lot....!!
very well brought up emotions and life will indeed bring the sunshine of happiness in lives dulled with shades of grey and despair....!!!