Comments : Night Shades

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice images of sunset and what takes place afterward. Good job.

  • 6 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    A very serene and quiet picturization of dusk setting in with night to follow, and a raven looking for his "night's rest" and "creatures of starless nights" but why raven? why starless? do they depict dark dreams? If so, I do understand. Beautifully dark and mysterious, perhaps to the reader.

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    I cannot pick a favorite. As I always say, your compositions are short and heavy. Such vividtiy, to be found within few words is scarce. Very well written. Stellar!

  • 6 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Great job, it is amazingly descriptive and can be appriciated more since you have written it so well that it is painted in my minds eye!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I loved this the image you set was amazing and the tittle drew me stright in penned to perfection connie x

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Great job Connie vivid and perfect images.
    Awesome girl

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A serene image that speaks volumes, those words were so simply put but you did amazing with this.
    Brilliant Girl

  • 6 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    I really like the wording and imagery that you use in this poem. Yes it is short but not all great poems got to be super long. This captures the readers attention and really gives a sense and vibe of the beauty you describe. Good job!

  • 6 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Connie! You created such intense, dark imagery that left me in awe! I love your choice of words, and I think everything was well-written.

    I loved your metaphors!!

    Great job hon!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the imagery you have painted here in this nature brings the night alive! Liked the read..excellent!

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    Connie, you painted a perfect picture of sunset, and not only do i find serenity, but also wildness because the contrast between ravens and this honey color over the horizon reflects that.

    Well done, amazing write, full of colors.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Like the sunset, sunrise, nature in general, your poems are beautiful, this poem is definitely one of the beautiful ones Im talkin about. It always amazes me, how do you do it? Create wonderful imagery with such short poems. I guess theres just one word for it, talent.

  • 6 years ago

    by Liliana

    Day has been relinquished to
    the creatures of starless nights,
    silent watchers of dreams.

    such amazing words, loved it 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Short and heavy...connie....fp

  • 6 years ago

    by yogi73

    I really like how this poem is so rooted in great imagery in the first stanzas; with the setting sun and the raven looking for his "midnight rest". You really close it nicely with the "...silent watchers of dreams." wonderful. you always impress

  • 6 years ago

    by Jennah Bella

    This poem was beautiful! I loved the imagery in this piece from start to end. It was a little short though that is the only downside for me.

    Still good write


  • 6 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Very poetic desrciption, and very original...gr8 write :) i'd love it if you could check out some of my stuff and let me know what u think