Comments : What i need

  • 6 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This reminds me of that one song..hmmm You cant always get what you want...
    I liked the message here Dagmar. You need to capitalize those I's. Some people get pissy about too many I's in a poem so I really do try to eliminate as I can. Oh, and ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS capitalize God :) Keep writing Dagmar!
    Lostlove

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
    People write what they feel in this case it was me I was writing about. I do like your poems a lot of insight.

  • 5 years ago

    by Joy Helberg

    This is absolutely true turn everything to God let him handle every worries that we have in life...God Bless

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Dagmar
    I like your poems, even this, I write even, due to you could take up fighting for your points in life, don't hand you self over to anyone yet

  • 5 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I loved diss...it was great

    And thankxx for the comments on my poems darl(:

    I give this a 5 lol(:

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    I like your poem because you said what I do believe: we get what we deserve. Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Curmudgeon

    Nice one

  • 5 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    It is directly from ur heart, a good message simple yet powerful 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Nicely written :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow! it so beautiful..5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Great poem of you! 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    You know Dagmar Wilson, your poem strikes chords with me, as we all know Life is a struggle. So everyday--

    1 John Chapter 4
    Verse 13
    "Hereby know we that we dwell in him, and he
    in us, because he has given us of his Spirit".

    Peace and Blessings

  • 5 years ago

    by Thomas

    Good poem, though I believe you can't put everything in God's hands.

    God does not control he just watches over you, find strength in that

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by anand singh

    Well the God said, ask for whatever you desire through my son and you shall recieve it...A very nice piece with a powerful meaning.
    An enjoyable read.

  • 1 year ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Many a true word spoken here Dagmar!
    Yes, let us leave it all to the hands of God!
    Well penned!

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    Trusting on God, believing on God is a very nice thing. Anyone can put his/her problems in the hands of God, but I believe anyone should hard to get what he/she wants. God is there for the guidance. In life, every body doesn't get everything. Nice poem.

    Now here, in your write I don't see any punctuation.

    Still I can say it's a nice poem.

  • 8 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An interesting and enjoyable thought provoking piece x