Comments : It's Really Over, Isn't It

  • 5 years ago

    by anonymous

    It took me a while to read it but i finally finished :) this is a really really really good poem!! it pulled me in in every sentence, it is a really heartfelt poem.. it is real deep as well. it expresses a ton of emotion.. well written 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Wow you really added alot of GREAT detail into this one :]]

    lots of emotion expressed :]

    i love it girly :]

    5/5 great job

  • 5 years ago

    by GodLovesEverbody

    I love you poems! They capture and delight me at ever word. You have a real talent not many can find keep up the good work!

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Amazing!so a long long poem..but quiet pretty..love this poem..keep up the good work=)5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I'm in total awe of this poem. Brilliant, awesome to describe it doesn't even come close.
    Just a great, great poem..
    Wish I could write like that.

  • 5 years ago

    by Tori

    Very, very detailed with feelings!!
    :) I am sure many can relate to this piece!

    Well, done! (:

  • 5 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Very detailed...lots of emotion. great job :)

  • I love the link between a paper cut and a broken heart.
    This piece is very expressing and emotional.

    Just a few spelling mistakes here and there.. Probably typos, nothing major.

    A beautifully sad piece. Well written.

    5/5

  • I love the link between a paper cut and a broken heart.
    This piece is very expressing and emotional.

    Just a few spelling mistakes here and there.. Probably typos, nothing major.

    A beautifully sad piece. Well written.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    AaaaAwwwww...this poem left me with aaaaAwwwww! Loaded with emotions... infact over-loaded?!?lol very well written!
    5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Abandoned Angel

    This is really good:)
    My favorite parts where:
    "My finger feels like my heart
    Skin broken and flush tore apart"
    and
    "I miss everything we had
    Why does good always have to turn to bad
    Life grows lucky to sad"
    I Think it's really clever how you used a paper cut,as a way of describing your feelings:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Terrin

    This is so good, but sad

  • 4 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Really a sad n emotional piece... So creatively expressed!
    well done!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Terrin

    This is another great poem..

  • 4 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    GOD should make some medicine for us so that we may forget all our miseries, pain and bitter memories. I can't console you. May God always shower His Bessings on you and give you strength to overcome this huge pain!

  • 4 years ago

    by Tess Harvester

    This poem has some incredibly vivid metaphors. What a great exploration of the grief of unrequited love! Wonderful! The repetition added so much too.