It took me a while to read it but i finally finished :) this is a really really really good poem!! it pulled me in in every sentence, it is a really heartfelt poem.. it is real deep as well. it expresses a ton of emotion.. well written 5/5
This is really good:)
My favorite parts where:
"My finger feels like my heart
Skin broken and flush tore apart"
"I miss everything we had
Why does good always have to turn to bad
Life grows lucky to sad"
I Think it's really clever how you used a paper cut,as a way of describing your feelings:)
GOD should make some medicine for us so that we may forget all our miseries, pain and bitter memories. I can't console you. May God always shower His Bessings on you and give you strength to overcome this huge pain!