I guess u won the challenge yuppppy:)Hhhhh
Its really great, I LOVE it :)

Loved it sista. Awesome piece.

Ah, it's awesome. The rhymes do work and you wrote it with ease. So creative mind. It really sounded like a tough challenge and it still sounds lol. But you finished it really fast. Excellent job.

You met his challenge with brilliance lol
You're awesome

Well, I guess you got me here. You accepted my challenge, and exceeded it. Very well done. <3

Whoa!! That was so creative AND yes, definitely a tongue twister. I failed multiple times when I tried reading it a little outloud. -smiles- It's so bubbly and cute and I just love it!! ^_^ Nice write!

5/5

I've never read a acrostic/tongue twister poem, this is amazingly written eloquently. I love the different idea attached to each stanza, very intriguing and beautiful. Excellent, I'm sure he'll be surprised how you pulled it off. I'm really inspired. KUDOS!

Awesome!!!

As if writing tongue twisters weren't hard enough lol

Well done with the challenge!!!

x

I love this alliterative double acrostic you have penned. It's a very fun read. :)

One line seems a bit clunky to me... the one with the "E's".

I have a suggestion:

Excitement explodes with endless esprit
enchantment erupts in sweet ecstasy

This is so cool!

You mastered this challenge, I would have so failed haha!

Enjoyed reading this poem :)

I love this lol never seen it before ... very well written

Wow that was a little tounge twister but still good cool idea too :)

You really penned the challenge, then :)
Hahah, you must be a super wife, and I really had my tongue twisted. And the rhyming, too... God, it's so creative.

Ohh i loved this one...
you are really very witty :D just loved the flow... The acrostic is amazing and your tongue twisters makes it even more interesting. Your husband would have loved it :D

Enjoyed reading :D

Bravo!! Well done. This was jovial and full of energy. I liked this alot. Very inventive and original.

Wow! This is amazing!! I can't even begin to imagine how long it took to not only have the tounge twisting make sense -- but to rhyme! Also, a great way to develop writing ability!!

....encore??

Hahahaha james u should never challenge my baby.....

I dont know if its me or the wine, your write or all three but i couldnt say it out loud lol!!

Such a cool write though syrup, as punishment james should read it aloud after a beer :-)

Big loves x