Comments : My Man (Acrostic/Tongue Twister)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I guess u won the challenge yuppppy:)Hhhhh
    Its really great, I LOVE it :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    Loved it sista. Awesome piece.

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    Ah, it's awesome. The rhymes do work and you wrote it with ease. So creative mind. It really sounded like a tough challenge and it still sounds lol. But you finished it really fast. Excellent job.

  • 5 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You met his challenge with brilliance lol
    You're awesome

  • 5 years ago

    by James Pike

    Well, I guess you got me here. You accepted my challenge, and exceeded it. Very well done. <3

  • 5 years ago

    by Bridges

    Whoa!! That was so creative AND yes, definitely a tongue twister. I failed multiple times when I tried reading it a little outloud. -smiles- It's so bubbly and cute and I just love it!! ^_^ Nice write!

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    I've never read a acrostic/tongue twister poem, this is amazingly written eloquently. I love the different idea attached to each stanza, very intriguing and beautiful. Excellent, I'm sure he'll be surprised how you pulled it off. I'm really inspired. KUDOS!

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    Awesome!!!

    As if writing tongue twisters weren't hard enough lol

    Well done with the challenge!!!

    x

  • 5 years ago

    by Kiko

    I love this alliterative double acrostic you have penned. It's a very fun read. :)

    One line seems a bit clunky to me... the one with the "E's".

    I have a suggestion:

    Excitement explodes with endless esprit
    enchantment erupts in sweet ecstasy

  • 5 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is so cool!

    You mastered this challenge, I would have so failed haha!

    Enjoyed reading this poem :)

  • 5 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I love this lol never seen it before ... very well written

  • 5 years ago

    by Lover Boy

    Wow that was a little tounge twister but still good cool idea too :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    You really penned the challenge, then :)
    Hahah, you must be a super wife, and I really had my tongue twisted. And the rhyming, too... God, it's so creative.

  • 5 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Ohh i loved this one...
    you are really very witty :D just loved the flow... The acrostic is amazing and your tongue twisters makes it even more interesting. Your husband would have loved it :D

    Enjoyed reading :D

  • 5 years ago

    by My Other Side

    Bravo!! Well done. This was jovial and full of energy. I liked this alot. Very inventive and original.

  • 5 years ago

    by Scrittore

    Wow! This is amazing!! I can't even begin to imagine how long it took to not only have the tounge twisting make sense -- but to rhyme! Also, a great way to develop writing ability!!

    ....encore??

  • 5 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Hahahaha james u should never challenge my baby.....

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I dont know if its me or the wine, your write or all three but i couldnt say it out loud lol!!

    Such a cool write though syrup, as punishment james should read it aloud after a beer :-)

    Big loves x