Comments : Lost in angel eyes

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The feeling of peace I received when reading your poem is indescribable. I am amazed at how you seem to take the most precious moments of life, and also the simplest, put them in words and leave the reader with the taste and atmosphere of it. It's like all my stress can just fade into the background....muscles relax and my heart smiles at this images of joy in our lives!

    I definitely agree with the first sip of coffee and the bliss chocolate can bring.....haven't yet experienced looking at a baby's smile but it truly must be heavensent. Each stanza kept getting more graceful and more magnificent in the man you are- strong because of her- strong because of love.

    Nice touch at the end of capitalizing angel eyes, making it personal and believing forever she is your true angel.

    A really calming piece, I just all-in-all enjoyed it. Keep it up- of course! And thanks for your thoughts on my work as well :)

    MaryAnne

  • 6 years ago

    by Lioness

    TJ I think this poem is so awesome.

    I love the images and I tell you that I have felt so many of the things you've mentioned in here. The chocolate melting on the tongue, the dipping in the pool. Oh I can so relate.

    To bring it back to the way you feel about someone I think you have done it well. An awesome poem by you with wonderful images and beautiful words.

    Great job TJ

    x

  • 6 years ago

    by Meme

    Awwwwww, that is just super sweet TJ!

    I guess that all combined describes how it feels to be in love.

    Great job :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Sighs... this poem is beautiful... TJ, I really enjoyed reading this piece. Such a lovely display from the heart.. very nice!

  • 6 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Sweet poem, I really like how you use life's most precious things to describe your love for another person. I find the words here so simple but yet tender.

    Sweet..

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Nice poem, TJ:)

    I love how love changes ordinary people into queens and kings. The feeling of being loved this way by another person really does something to your self esteem. I think we all deserve to have this kind of relationship in our lives:)

    I love the analogies and yup, it does feel like all these emotions all wrapped into one!

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    Lovely piece, bro.. I like how you describe the nuances of your lover when she eats, drinks, swims...

    great write!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Did you ever notice
    the sensation that comes
    over you after biting off
    a piece of chocolate and
    letting it melt slowly
    on your tongue?

    ^Your opening stanza has made me hungry for chocolates! That is indeed a sensation that no words can describe and to feel love that way is just magical!!

    How about that cool
    refreshing dip in a pool
    when the scorching summer
    sun torments your skin.

    ^This is indeed interesting. To be soothed by the coolness of love's touch after life's burning reality.

    The experience of a babies first smile,
    as his tiny fingers reach out to
    hold on to your hand? Soft
    cooing sounds tease tears
    of joy .

    ^Any mother, for that matter any parent can relate to this feeling. To feel the fingers of an innocent child touching us is like God's tender love healing us..well at least that is what as a mother I feel..a lovely stanza!

    As I look into your angel eyes
    all these sensations wash over
    me. A combined expression of
    what your love does to me.

    ^They say that a person's eyes reveals a lot and it can also encourage and lift a sad heart. The one you love has warmth and moves your soul..that is what love is all about, to touch you and renew you and take you to great heights.

    I live in a dream , wading in
    a magic pond of emotions
    that dance around me. In your
    eyes I see the man I can be, strong
    protective and yours forever.
    I love you Angel Eyes

    ^ :) any woman would want this. To have a man who will always be there for her in everywhere..like a knight!
    Enjoyed this heart warming read..take care.

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I think I know who this is for and if I'm right it's a wonderful poem from a heart that beats true.

    love the simple words and images of joy Hugs dear friend

  • 6 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Fantastic tj really strong emotions

    Its was all powerful emotions but the last 3 stranzas
    just went tht step further ..

    Its one of them poems you wish you wrote any girl would be proud to have a poem dedicaited to her .

    The experience of a babies first smile,
    as his tiny fingers reach out to
    hold on to your hand? Soft
    cooing sounds tease tears 
    of joy .

    My fav stranza well done bro
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Jenni

    I do agree to the above comments somewhat though I do not think that this poem is "just beautiful". Well, yes it is beautiful, but in my opinion it gives that word a new definition, a more gentle and stronger meaning at once. More gentle as you being at ease while telling and the reader while reading, the tone is really soft, but filled with conviction and stronger as in the emotions in this poem, slowly entwining around you as you read, giving you some sort of hug, sharing the happiness with you. I hope that makes sense.

    Usually love poems are directed at one specific person, which ends up warming their heart in this very special way, but your poem obviously managed to touch many as we can see in the above comments and it also got to me.

    I am sure you'll be able to keep that spirit up for a long while. Absolutely well written and touching poem, which shows your heartiness very well.

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Amazing write I loved it,,great imagery :) alot of emotions poured from this poem kinda like music to the ears :) fantastic job and a great piece indeed 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Beautiful expression of love ............the reader can visualize havin that sip of coffee hmmmm the chocolate melting........lovely buid up . :)

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    This poem sounded so romantic to me specially in the next stanza because it ties up everything else that was said. Beautiful poem.

    " As I look into your angel eyes
    all these sensations wash over
    me. A combined expression of
    what your love does to me."

  • 6 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Awhh I really love that title, its cute in an elegant way

    as is the poem, this is a love poem. :) so deeply felt by the reader. . . . strong emotions

    you can really tell the love it holds :) nicely written

  • 6 years ago

    by Heavy

    -Smiling away over here- This is so SO cute. A precious poem!! I love how you mentioned all of the things everyone can relate to! All of the special little moments - Moments that make you feel all warm and fuzzy, even relaxed and happy inside!! I adore this poem!! You did a wonderful job portraying your feelings for your special someone! Adorable!! ^_^

    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Jennah Bella

    I often find love poems on this site soppy, idealistic and too far away from reality but upon reading this I felt waves of refeshment because this poem is excellent I couldn't help but be moved by its sweetness.

    I love how you drew the reader in by listing simple everyday things the reader can relate to.

    This poem made me think of my fiance and I loved how you combined being soft, gentle and sweet without being cheesey or idealistic.

    There is an air of honesty in this piece that I am sure many people in love can relate too.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I'm lost in your poem! HaHa :P .. Ahh such I lovely write for that special lady :) Very romantic, touching and expressed so beautiful... with the images expressed all wrapped up into one word ~ LOVE :)

    Well written and expressed TJ! :D
    You've got it ;) ~ Talent

  • 6 years ago

    by Muran

    Spreading feeling of love around, thank you for sharing such a wondeful feeling.

  • 6 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I cannot decide if this is written for a specific person in your life right now or just your imagination gathering these wonderful thoughts and feelings to express to your love when they appear. In either case, these are experiences that any woman would know and understand just how much you do love her. Everyday happenings that I will no longer think of as ordinary thanks to your words.