WOW! Such amazing imagery here.
I can just picture the stars being hidden by thick snow falling from the sky. Beautiful!
piling up the trails
treaded on, to seek for the
I believe this is a 'syllable count' necessary poem - so I can understand this, but I don't think 'treaded' is a word - I think it may simply be 'tread' --I'm not definite though.
Great continuation from the first lines. (:
embed flame that ignites sparks.
A brilliant ending - it kind of draws everything together:
*stars - like little 'sparks' of light in the sky
*winter - fire is needed for warmth
I really like this piece. Short but sweet and quite a depth for such a piece.
Beautiful word choice - a clear image was created throughout. Well done!