Comments : I'll fake it..

  • 12 years ago

    by elijah

    I'll fake all the smiles
    And hold back all the screams
    great line I hav felt this many times in my life

    I'll fake It and say
    "I'm ok"
    And know its not
    Right....
    great I hav heard this a lot its 1 of the biggest lies ever people saying that they r ok but actually not

    I'll fake it all
    If it stops the
    Questions....
    amazing great way to end it its very true u did an outstanding job I loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "The whole nigt"
    typo:night

    I have days like these, when I just want to write something even if there's no inspiration. And this is very relatable to me.. People constantly asking questions are irritating. Questioning your life, your past, your mistakes.. It just degrades a person and make them feel alone in this over-filled world.. Great write 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The truth to be told. You did an awesome
    job. The faking part, the questions stop
    can relate to that

  • 12 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    I feel the same but you express it way better.

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Girl u were right u have grammer mistakes but then again poetry is letting go so it's good for me just retouch it up a bit okay?

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    5/5 like always girl :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Reyna

    I totally understand that feeling. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    Nice poem there is "The whole nigt"
    nigt should be night i think
    other than that i love it
    5/5 keep on =)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Keep writing, The emotion is felt within this piece despite the little grammar errors but then again I have plenty of those.

  • 12 years ago

    by Solus

    Sometimes the need to write is all that is required....

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    Yeah at least you tried right? well id maybe change the stanzas around a little but other than that a sweetly sad poem. its sad that someone would have to go about life like this. i think that lies the true tragedy here. wonder poem however

  • 12 years ago

    by josefina reyna

    Wonderful bravo:) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    ..yet it's quite better, now you have shared.. Well done! High 5! from meee..