6 beautiful months,
Oh hearing that gives me goosebumps.
It seems like a dream,
with strawberries and cream.
We have been together, forever, it seems.
Though i dont want to seem, too keen.
I cherish the moments we are together,
Not knowing if this is forever.
Taking pictures with my mind,
Leaving the past behind.
As each day comes and goes,
My mind almost explodes.
Only three simple words,
Calms me from being so absurd.
Hugs and kisses,
For love never misses.
Just being in your arms,
Is a wonderful charm.
And knowing you are mine,
gives me all the time.
In the world, that i need,
To get me back up to speed.
We have been through drama and all,
No wander it didnt take long for me to fall.
Though we are nowhere near the end,
I still wander what else god has got to send.
To get in our way,
Oh, but he will pay.
for we are stronger then gold,
And will be together til we are old.
I really liked your rhyming, it was just good and your choice of words were amazing. I felt this piece was full of hope and joy, that you have made it thus far is no joke but there is still a tough road ahead, be strong and love each other always and i know and believe you will be together always.
Awww this reminds me of high school love <3 I have a few suggestions for you....the flow was off just a bit, Id consider some rewording or adding the same amount of syllables to each line to give it a better flow..
Other than that this took me back to childhood love, so cute!