Hmm this isnt bad
"just say I do
and I will to" to at last should be too
good start good luck with your next write =)

Awe thank you it means a lot.. (:

Nice. Short but sweet I love it! 100/10. Good job Hun.

Thans!!!

Happiness that heals sinister = INFACTUATION.. When Infactuation dies, Love grows.. Love is what remains after pain.. Sacrifice, that makes liberation.. Hold on still, till Long run vote counts.. Before you proceed, weigh the end.. Thank you for sharing.. Good try..

Short but so passionate, meaningfl and straight from the heart, able to relate to so many people, great job!!!

This was extreamly well writin. it needs a few tweeks but other then that it was very good