Comments : Fire

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is something else that is deeper behind these lines I feel. You use fire as a destruction to many things and lives; at the same time it can be seen as a person who has come into many lives and destroyed them knowingly or unknowingly..well at least that is what I got from this write...take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This took my breath away, BRAVO BRAVO, fantasic

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Very meaningful piece. I have many lessons to learned from this poem. I love the metaphor of fire and the way you worded every line. I really enjoy this piece...a lot. And thank you for sharing this. Keep writing more:))
    5/5
    ~C