There is a time and place for everything.
If you have the urge to drink, make plans
don't get behind the wheel , you may kill
either yourself or other innocent people
5/5

Yup, there is not such a thing as drink and driving safe. I like this poem and what it means.

Though I'm not a drunkard, I feel warned about drunk-driving. This is a really powerful piece that ALOT of people SHOULD read.
"so how
do you expect to take
control of something
else."
A question mark instead of a period would heighten the importance of this question. And I think it would be better if you expand on what that 'something else' is.
"You could get
behind the wheel
when you're drunk
but someone else
may end up under it,"
---I love this part. Instead of the perfunctory 'you might kill someone', this is a nice way to pen that.
"Don't be so selfish.
There's no such
thing as drink
driving safely."
--I won't lie, this made me laugh^^
It's somewhat sarcastic haha. But it would be better if revised to: "there's no such thing as driving drunk safely"
Overall, great piece. Keep writing
-X

I drink, I don't drive, because if I had my own car...I don't know it wouldn't be called car anymore! haha. One of our relatives used to drink too much till he had ulcer in his stomache, ewwww, his face was at first pale and he is now deprived of too many beautiful things. Your poem really really really REALLY is constructive! and so helpful to lots of people.

'You could get
behind the wheel
when you're drunk
but someone else
may end up under it,'

Well, that made me shiver! I just imagined someone being killed or run over by me, ughhh that gave me chills. I liked how you simply expressed your idea, with some powerful images here and there.

I enjoyed the read, Liz!

A standing ovation for this piece. Very wonderful message and you have written it in a fun way but one reads grasping the message it conveys. I agree with you on this piece in that one really cant expect to control things when drunk. The questions just kept me glued and how you seem to write of someone who is naive made it more interesting.

The flow was a little off but it is really powerful message, Good write

Liz, I just loved this piece here, it was so well written, like giving the message and just realy showing the harsh reality of drink driving...

At first, I was unsure of where it was leading, cos I felt myself nodding, yes I like a drink, and etc but then I was like, WOW she really gives this poem a great interest here.

Liz, You just rock

xxxx

Very powerful, good message.