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by AnotherPlasticSmile May 29, 2012
Sadness, depression /
There's a blade to my skin;
Tears in my eyes.
Blood drips down
As part of me dies.
Pulsing through me
Red glows through the black.
My soul under attack
Everyone but me knowing what I lack
What differs me from the rest?
What leave this pain deep with in my chest?
What drills these holes in my heart?
What rips and tares and pulls me apart?
I need help.
I can no longer lie.
I do not wish to die...
by Kitty Kurse
Aw this is so full of emotion I really liked it Im adding it to my favs<3 Loved your use of words as well.
This was good, raw emotions in it indeed.
it made my heart raise as I was getting towards the end. 5/5
Reading this made me feel like there was more to read.. Sad poem but alot of people can relate and thats what drew me in.. 5/5
by KRYSTAL B
This is very good and very sad, if this is true about you I hope you get all the help you ask for and want, never give up
This piece is full of raw emotion. thats what makes it great. its a very good read. and its very relatable