Comments : Finally happy...

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    Powerful poem Janis. I can feel your pain.

  • 5 years ago

    by Cinda Berard

    Morose, Morbid and full of despair! Bad visual my friend... No one is happy with an ending this way... tc

  • 5 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Nice poem Janis Very powerful.
    I could 'feel' those words!

  • 4 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Well written the imagery is great even with such unhappy feelings