Have you ever read about the Intelligent Design Movement?
I have some info, if ou care to read: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Intelligent_design_movement
6 years ago
by Purple Rose
Typos: In the last stanza, third and fourth lines, the 'h' in the 'he's' should be capitalized because you are still talking about God, if you are not , then completely ignore me :) Also, as an afterthought, I wouldn't have 'Our' capitalized in the last stanza, but maybe you are putting some emphasis on it? I am just trying to help :) it is your poem, so you do what you want to with it...
I really, really like this poem Randy. It is beautiful. I like how you used the parables about the mustard seed, and the story of Moses.
Wow! I am amazed at how you view Him. I am a person that never once believed in religion. But there is NO doubt in my head that HE is up there. I never would have made it this far in my life if it wasn't for Him!
This is an amazing poem and you did very well! The title is what caught my eye, and then the rest kept me going!
I'm sorry, that's just not my style. I like rhyme in my poetry, and tangible thoughts that fit together. Not the compressed mystery that your style proposes, I like your added lines in the end though, not necessarily for this poem tho.
pushing up through the white soil of divinity, love that!!