Comments : Lemonade (Haiku)

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    If this is available then everything is perfect! Nothing missing!
    Well done Maple Tree.
    <<<Khalid>>>

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I looooove haiku's.....and i just adore your formed poetry !!!!!!

    Wonderfully calming write syrup!

  • 5 years ago

    by Meme

    Thats so refreshing on a HOT summer day :-)

  • 5 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: If you are talking about the drink, it should be 'lemonade' instead of 'lemon aide.' If you are not, then completely ignore me :]

    This is probably the nicest haiku that I have read so far, because I totally agree with it. I don't like the original lemonade, because I think that it is too sour for me, so pink lemonade is my favorite. This makes me want to have some right now especially with the heat that we have been having. Whoever knew that I would miss 80 degree weather?

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    One of the best Haiku's I've read on this site.
    It's so refreshing to read, just like lemonade is to drink.

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    I love Lemonade, the one my aunt does :P

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I never read a haiku that made me thirsty, until now aha.
    This is definitely one of my favorite haikus on this site (:

  • 5 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    I WANT A CUP. PLEASE.

  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I love Hailu's too, because they're simple, but rich. Awesome piece.
    Can I have a cup too?

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I enjoyed reading this, although from Scotland, looks like this Haiku is the only sign of summer we will have!! lol

    Good job