Comments : Adrift

  • 5 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Such a nice poem...
    just want to say that i loved ur poem!!

  • 5 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    Stellar! A piece pointed to the heart.

  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    To who ever this poem is written for, he/she must be a good person, and must be proud, cuz I can see in this poem a strong and honest friendship. And I hope it lasts forever.
    I really was moved by this poem, you did an awesome job.

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    Even if it was open for critiques, I wouldnt find any.
    Whoever, your friend is, Thank You!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Max

    OMG OMG this is perfect
    I love this poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    BEAUTIFUL.

    That is all that I can say. I am also thankful to your friend because they inspired you to write this.

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    Beautiful, simply beautiful.

    It sounds like you and your friend are lucky to have one another.

    LOVED IT

    x

  • 5 years ago

    by The Prince

    Not a fan of the form but this is so lovely! Really well written. Poignant without being melodramatic and some lovely and touching images.

    Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is a touching and very heart gripping piece Xanthe :-)

  • 5 years ago

    by Kondwa

    Incredible poem.. very descriptive.