How sweet. She indeed is a very special
lady. This certainly will put a smile on her
face.I can feel the compassion and respect
your have for her, written with so much
elegance and emotions.
5 years ago
by Wild flower
Awwwwww thats sooooooooooo sweet^_^
She's gonna smile after reading this. Love it.
Safffiiieee, even if this wasn't for Andrea, I'm in love with this piece. But in love with it more since its for her.
Loved the triple haiku! Awesome job on syllable count and choosing words that made sense throughout this piece. I love how this can relate to andrea as a person, or it can literally describe the actual tree...this was brilliant.
Awww I loooveeeee her so much, she is my favoritee human being, well one of them.
Now let me tell you sommething, haikus impress me, for one main major reason: I cannot write ones!
And to see a triple one, just :( teased the hell out of me.
I love two things over, one the 1st stanza that could represent any any maple tree, and two: that even the 1st stanza that could represent a maple tree also could be...the characteristics of Andrea...as a friend, always being there :shading me.
And being free and boundless...
Also the 2nd stanza...oh how i love it, showing her different sides, "My colourful friend"
that's a very beautiful line.
routes deeper than sea, how awesome is that line ? it shows that she might be someone with so many secrets, also with so many stories, yet at the same time you may be referring to her as being an honest person who is as deep as that...keeps everything told to her own, without breaking oaths.
I love your last part, here you stopped talking about her as person but went for the emotional part, showing how dear she is, and how much you respect her.
The poem in all flowed so well, loved your simple word choice and neat imagination.
Loved the fact that it was a TRIPLE HAIKU FOR GODS SAKE...