Comments : Maple Tree ( triple haiku )

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    How sweet. She indeed is a very special
    lady. This certainly will put a smile on her
    face.I can feel the compassion and respect
    your have for her, written with so much
    elegance and emotions.
    awesome job

  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Awwwwww thats sooooooooooo sweet^_^
    She's gonna smile after reading this. Love it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Safffiiieee, even if this wasn't for Andrea, I'm in love with this piece. But in love with it more since its for her.

    Loved the triple haiku! Awesome job on syllable count and choosing words that made sense throughout this piece. I love how this can relate to andrea as a person, or it can literally describe the actual tree...this was brilliant.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meme

    Awwwwwww Saffie :) I am sure this will paint a huge smile in Andrea's face .. I love it <3

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This poem truly did make me smile* thank you Saffie... its a breathtaking piece..!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Jenni

    I really enjoyed reading this poem because it clearly showed how much you appreciate her. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Awww I loooveeeee her so much, she is my favoritee human being, well one of them.

    Now let me tell you sommething, haikus impress me, for one main major reason: I cannot write ones!

    And to see a triple one, just :( teased the hell out of me.

    I love two things over, one the 1st stanza that could represent any any maple tree, and two: that even the 1st stanza that could represent a maple tree also could be...the characteristics of Andrea...as a friend, always being there :shading me.
    And being free and boundless...

    Also the 2nd stanza...oh how i love it, showing her different sides, "My colourful friend"
    that's a very beautiful line.

    routes deeper than sea, how awesome is that line ? it shows that she might be someone with so many secrets, also with so many stories, yet at the same time you may be referring to her as being an honest person who is as deep as that...keeps everything told to her own, without breaking oaths.

    I love your last part, here you stopped talking about her as person but went for the emotional part, showing how dear she is, and how much you respect her.

    The poem in all flowed so well, loved your simple word choice and neat imagination.
    Loved the fact that it was a TRIPLE HAIKU FOR GODS SAKE...

    well done! 5/5excellent

  • 5 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Lovely poem for a special lady..excellent

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    This is awesome, I will have to have a go at writing one of these myself.

    Love the routes deeper than the sea line.

    just awesome.

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    It is a masterpiece.Stunning piece.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Maybe Andrea smile to you for this tripple, I do
    br
    Olecarsten

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very beautiful dedication... Loved the imagery.... Awesome:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Amreen

    Lovely write..... I like the way you descibe her and her work and her hobbies... I too adore her.... Wish I knew her more..... She is simply outstanding...!
    Great piece of work:)