I'm still learning how to fall

Agreed. Its more like a story, but the way you put up/using your words makes it sound a lot more like a poem. Like half-story, half-poem? Anyways, this is beautiful.

Keep up the good work! :D

Awwww this poem is more like a story rather than a poem but it's kind of true in reality although alot of girls have this problem sadly but over all it's a good think and everyone can understand it! 4/5 sorry

Lady Persephone