Comments : Beauty.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Such a soft spoken poem. It makes the heart melt. I like it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Such a soft spoken poem. It makes the heart melt. I like it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Pete Daniels

    Hi brooke,
    What a lovely poem, simple words and yet I feel it was written from the heart. Love is a strange and unfathomable thing. well done, and keep writing.x

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wonderful poem, truly warmed my heart, I'm wondering if the "But", the first word on the last line is supposed to be "By", or not, just wondering, but oustanding poem!!!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Squeegeeviolet

      I didnt know whether to put by or but there, i dunno. Sorry. Thank you for your comment :)