Exactly

by Cold Kira   Jan 19, 2013


Things are done.
I am lost and gone,
but suddenly fall
to the ground.
no one seek,
no one hide,
but i know
things will be done
if somebody
can release me.
I feel sad
but I don't want
to be mad.
cause I am
what I am..

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  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Hi, I liked this it's really deep and has lots of emotion within it. Really personal too.

    A few edit suggestions:
    'can realized me.'
    ^^
    I think realized should be "release.'

    'but i don't want
    to mad.'
    I think before mad you should have 'be'

    Great write, Em

  • 4 years ago

    by zephelis

    Very interesting !!^_^ keep it up

  • 4 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Interesting...

    • 4 years ago

      by Cold Kira

      Thanks for appreciating my poem..

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