Comments : You Failed...HAHA

  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    WOW, this is very intense, wonderful piece of art, very deep and heart stirring

  • 4 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Awww...so emotional.....great write:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This really is excellent. It's a sad scenario, but you make it worth while to read and stay invested. I also like the bit of humor you added at the end; it validates the speaker truly is "not all there".

  • 4 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    So terribly sad. The smile at the end, is so tauntingly dark and intense. It's a little bit scary.
    But a great write.<3 xoxo

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    I don't know if I should take the laugh as sarcasm... But it does sound.. Though, it really is a sad piece.

  • 4 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Wow I trully love it. I feel so much like that. I've failed so many times at suicide.

    • 4 years ago

      by Natasha

      Know that you're not alone in this, Kelwin.
      You're never really alone, you just think you are.

      Okay? :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Nice talking poem. But please avoid the words like suicide and death.

  • 2 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Absolutely
    hauntingly
    artistically
    dark poem u have written

    I mean I totally connect
    people think that if u fail
    that you're a survivor
    but really you've succeeded

    ... something inside u is gone forever