WOW, this is very intense, wonderful piece of art, very deep and heart stirring

Awww...so emotional.....great write:)

This really is excellent. It's a sad scenario, but you make it worth while to read and stay invested. I also like the bit of humor you added at the end; it validates the speaker truly is "not all there".

So terribly sad. The smile at the end, is so tauntingly dark and intense. It's a little bit scary.
But a great write.<3 xoxo

I don't know if I should take the laugh as sarcasm... But it does sound.. Though, it really is a sad piece.

Wow I trully love it. I feel so much like that. I've failed so many times at suicide.

Nice talking poem. But please avoid the words like suicide and death.

Absolutely
hauntingly
artistically
dark poem u have written

I mean I totally connect
people think that if u fail
that you're a survivor
but really you've succeeded

... something inside u is gone forever