One wish

by Sherwin Talapian   Jan 29, 2013


If i had and i will be given.
A chance to wish from a fairy god mother.
To be with you and grow old together.
This one wish i will treasure forever.
And if this one wish will come true.
My love this one i promise to you.
That only you and you always be.
My one wish that will do complete me.

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I LOVE ALL OF IT, graceful and becoming, wonderful job, the way it flowed was so talent-filled and overwhelming, outstnading poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I LOVE ALL OF IT, graceful and becoming, wonderful job, the way it flowed was so talent-filled and overwhelming, outstnading poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chae

    I like this!(:

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is cute. It rhymes, and it feels like it's touched with a little bit of magic. Short, and very, very sweet.

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    I like the 2 line in this poem since it makes me think of my childhood and this poem is very sweet and short but it would look prettier if it was centered that way it's looks and reads like a fairy-tale poem! :) overall it's good! :) 5/5

    Queen Ash

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