I have no idea how much of a distance can a turtle walk in a minute but I heard the toroise are pretty slow.

Great write 5/5

"Awww!" was my first response, but I have more to say about it, haha. This is such a powerful poem, with a simple yet thought provoking metaphor. It's the perfect description of a strong bond, and it reminded me of the saying "distance makes the heart grow fonder." Beautiful piece, Mohan.

Wow, that is so remarkable!! I really liked reading it, fantastic poem!!

When I go from poem to poem on this site none really get my eye but this one.......im entirely in love with. your a awesome poet keep on.

That is a slow and painful way of forgetting love, worse part is, it will never help to forget! Touching write.

Time will heal all wounds and pain becomes manageable. Very powerful written

Forgetting is indeed a very slow process. A sad and a very clever write.