Take a bow

by Rebecca Bentley   Apr 2, 2013


Take a trip down memory lane,
Here the applause,
Do you feel the fame?

Congratulations,
You think you've won.
Now your famous,
My time is done.

Do you here the applause,
Baby its for you,
Don't be so naïve
I was the one with no clue.

Take a bow,
Don't show remorse,
My heart is broken,
And your the cause.

The game you played,
I played it too,
Now your the clown,
Yes, your the fool.

My heart might sit in piece's,
But boy i've had my fun.
The applause is for the idiot,
Who foolishly thought he'd won.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This poem reminds me so much of a song by Rihanna called "Take A Bow"... but you made it your own.

    Overall, a good piece...really like the ending!

  • 10 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Love the message behind this ...

    Also your word choice was very clear

    Awesome little piece

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another great poem Rebecca!
    Your words express emotion so very well.
    A truly great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I loved this. Some poems I just simply enjoy reading and this was one of them for sure!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done Rebecca!!!

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